Sunday, January 26, 2014
Junior Crit Feedback
- It comes off like the old creature realizes the little guy is useful (not exactly the intent)
- One more tree scene to establish “usefulness?"
- Some shots where it was dragged out far too long
- Having the old guy have to care for the little guy somehow
- Has to make a decision about saving/protecting the little guy
- Two instances of the little guy being in trouble, the first old guy is indifferent, the second he decides to save him
- Do more with the water scene
- Trim down walking profile shots
- Trim down sleeping dissolves
- Show old guy in pain getting fruit
- Switch shot angles up a bit
- Camera moves
- Concentrate on the background layers (NO DEAD SPACE)
- The little guy WINNING HIM OVER
- Spend more time with the actions of the characters (character DEVELOPMENT)
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